I asked a friend if they could take a look at the turnaround sheet I created for the Ember character. They then kindly tore it apart! From that I started to fix the problem areas that were pointed out, but I got a little carried away and changed a whole lot more. Here's a new sketch of how the character is looking.
Still though, I'm only somewhat happy with it. Though it definitely looks better than before, I think I could just keep remaking it over and over forever. At some point I just have to stop myself or it will never get completed. And because of that I decided to change the name from Ember to Ember 2.02 (cause there were a few different versions before this one).